Wednesday 19 September 2018

my speech 2018

1 comment:

  1. hey it's Chester,I liked the way you explained what you did and you added a lot of information.Did you think about how long it is or short it is.To improve, you could make the long one shorter because it’s too long to read and i want to read all of them.


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